My heart pardons for a fault I did
Illicit gaffe of disruptive spike
Blindness and dumbness all through the life
Holding breath for the existence of HOPE
Restless thoughts of repentant portraits
Persecutions warm up into the inner soul
Rousing divinity and peace recreates in my mind
Hidden scabrous feelings conspire as a SCAR.
deep thought provoking!
Thank you so much, Dheedhi!
Rahul
Does the fact that I can relate to that make me crazy?
Yeah! But not in everyone’s case. It depends on the mentality in approaching such sort of aspects. Thank you so much for your humble comment. Have a good time ahead. Cheers.\m/
Rahul
XD It is very important to be able to laugh at and with oneself and kindred spirits. Your writing is eloquent as usual. Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much for your humble and esteemed commenting activity! Have a great New Year coming ahead. Cheers.\m/
Rahul
I like your poem, it relays hope and understanding. Nice prose!
Aww…! Thank you much for stopping by my little space and the commenting activity, Madam. Have a great time ahead. God bless. Cheers.\m/
Rahul
Very nice metaphors.
Thank you so much, Kim! Happy New Year to you and your family. Have a good time there. Cheers.
Rahul
Thanks and a wonderful start into 2013 to you and your family.
Different phases, different experiences and a beautiful poem. Albeit we should never loose hope!